let me know what do u think about my track

[lævita]

lately, i been making some tracks with basic drums, this is the most i liked, i always think "less is more"
this mix its no the final one, im still learning.

[zin]

i always think "less is more"

same, I feel like if you're able to produce a captivating track with minimal resources, it'll benefit your music in the long run

my first thoughts:

drum pattern immediately made me think of Audrey Hørne's "Walking With Fire" (first track on this mix, his track takes a while to kick off: https://soundcloud.com/tales-from-the-c ... n-the-cvlt) - I like it, but maybe diversify it a tiny bit, some breaks here and there? just a thought

I like the distant howling vocals, random sound effects (gun shots, open till)

not too sure about the lead keys, they sound a bit like a toy piano, but not in a creepy-enough way - but I understant that might've been your intention